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Drauntz
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0 posted 2007-05-25 01:05 AM


Did you see their eyes?
Did you see their eyes
on blood dripping Knife?
Did you hear the cries?
Did you hear the cries
of infants when mothers were dragged?

Did you see the house burning?
the burning house dried their hurting tears.
Did you hear the gun shotting?
The shotting gun  frizzed  their inner fears.

Endurance, Endurance, Endurance,
beg and beg and beg and beg
For life.
For living life
Seeds of hope, socked in warm blood
deeply buried with tortured corpse

thought when reading Marge's book and WW2

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1 posted 2007-05-25 09:26 AM


Bao~
You do great honor to my people to be so touched by the stories in 'Out of the Whispering Winds'

Thank you dear lady ... and all of those who suffered at the hands of tyrants of the past deserve our remembrance and tears~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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2 posted 2007-05-27 11:46 PM


This is like an emotional history lesson , i learned alot while feeling it as well
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2007-05-29 02:39 AM


gosh

I'm speechless

WindWalker
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4 posted 2007-05-31 09:00 PM


I agree, this is like an emotional history lesson!!!!! Very good writing!!!!!!!!!
Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion
5 posted 2007-06-02 07:56 PM


wow nice write

I am the little cracked mirror

The Lady
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6 posted 2007-06-03 09:54 PM



stopped me in my tracks

very potent Drauntz

MindBodySoul
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7 posted 2007-06-04 11:05 PM


I am frozen with emotion over your words!

WOW... it took me back to all those who have suffered such torture...

Thank you!

Hope all is well!!

Jen--->MindBodySoul

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