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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2007-01-19 09:34 AM

She is beauty
tracing the edges of life
in her gracefulness

yet she is untamed
and wild, sometimes she is
    stormy eyed.

She is artistic,
her masterpiece
   is her soul
and she captures my essence
on her canvas

lightly brushing
the soft shades,
melding them as one
into waves of tranquility

       she fulfills me

as she offers her breath
to my parched lips
soothing the burn
          of yesterday

drenching me
        while quenching the thirst
for moments like this
when in her simplicity
I become lost
in the ripples of
endless possibilities...

         drifting

{revised 01-19-2007}

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

© Copyright 2007 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved

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with you

1 posted 2007-01-19 10:22 AM

you have to know how much I love this...

it's so beautiful!!! I'm keeping this for sure...

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2007-01-19 10:41 AM

Sheer poetry! ~ From the title to the closing word "drifting". You are a very fine poetess, Gentle One!

Very lovely, indeed!!!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2007-01-19 11:13 AM

"I become lost
in the ripples of
endless possibilities...

drifting"

Excellent write!!

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

SmartChick
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4 posted 2007-01-19 12:05 PM

An excellent write, Donna.

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2007-01-19 12:07 PM

Soothing.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2007-01-19 12:28 PM

oh this was magnificant

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2007-01-19 04:11 PM

my friends, you are all so kind. Thank you, each. Hugs, and peace

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

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The Southwest

8 posted 2007-01-19 07:23 PM

oh! this is an exceptional piece of work
gentle Donna

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

9 posted 2007-01-19 08:11 PM

She is a dream, beautiful...

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