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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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and... turth hurried to seal the day making few impressions yet... kingdom in it's own making sojourner still living still advancing making me a poor slave lectures sweet confessions thoughts shared audibly the present... oh gathering farmer speculation with no expectations currency finding text I overheard the masters of humanity watchover but never interject veins of kindness...consideration stimulating human motives putting forth energy allowing intellect trials of life our angst for hopelessness dulls understanding be free, let go those lisless manners of patience half-performed opinions dirty looks...hostilities of mind common folks who choose and why the whole world cries against it truth is faith in the course of conversations mutually discovered opens the breath of mind intimacy...oh intimacy a prayer for the beaten mortified pride & deep chagrin then... a maiden declaring food for thought lights one candle ambition...desire to please nights of small favors unattainable, but there whipping her silly sometimes a slave to stupidity searching for validity for taking what is not her own but to safe from bitter pains from fears insincerity hypocrisy intimidation go see liberty truth ~ answers a most shocking spectacle slaughters monsters & ruffians that spill human blood beating crime with the eyes of faithful spirits truth can't be molested nor denied in that I receive a privileged portion of a life that is shared by many for I own no thing man alters outward property frightful illusions dreamy myth horrid reality we are naked in truth with many fields yet to work never really safe or for certain... always hungry but filled with promise and so tonight I shall lay naked with you in truth ...and the legs of life wrapped round me so in love |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Good ending, enjoyed the read. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"truth can't be molested nor denied" Oh-Aye, and precious is the truth my dear… You are a gifted and talented writer Lee J. And you are as free as you wish to be. Aren’t we all. Love to ya!!  JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed. ~Jesus Christ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You do write the loveliest thoughtbeats...forgive my earlier comparison to your work as a drug? That was more a sad reflection of me than your work. "always hungry but filled with promise" smile...but it's so close to how it is--you very aptly describe things that are beyond my reach. Love you lady! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Lee I read your poems again and again -- and find myself savoring the images and word as they weave. Alison |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"we are naked in truth with many fields yet to work" beautiful LeeJ and those legs of life... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hello LeeJ, of thoughts so wide and amazingly deep truth is faith Indeed! or faith is truth  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Lovely Leggy Lee! Another fine spill from thy quill. I especially liked these lines. "we are naked in truth with many fields yet to work" ~ and your closing lines weren't half-bad either!!!  ~ as well as all the lines in between! Have a great day! Loveya! Linda P.S. I just realized that this reply is my 31,000th post! How time flies ~ when you're "Free".  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
LeeJ - I just can't help but love the corners of your mind where wisdom and insight grows and multiplies. And the "cobwebs" - how they stretch and wrap themselves around us. Amazing write as usual! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I read this before and thought that I had replied to it. This is well worth, the second read. Nicely done, lady. |
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