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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Spring Very late In afternoon Blue sky— snow White clouds above Deep pink haze Sparrows Among branches Honey bees From flower to flower At dusk In the peach orchard Her faint perfume . |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
dear John, you are writing the "universe" in your not quite long poems. "Spring Very late In afternoon".... time "Blue sky— snow White clouds above Deep pink haze"...colors and softness "Sparrows Among branches Honey bees From flower to flower"...life "At dusk In the peach orchard Her faint perfume".... of course, the last... human or the bloom but you have mentioned flower above, so this "her" must be a human figure. beautiful and again, very beautiful. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
most pleasant minimalistic 'impressionism'! enjoyed!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You pen is a brush... painting vivid pictures for our pleasure... Beautiful! |
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