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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2007-05-22 11:28 AM

erronious
withered black eyes
brainless smiles
playing cards
with
faraway songs
light rain
going past my room
notions under my bed
telling "me" i wasn't welcome?
symbolic figures
stampeding horses
wanting better words
jumping
falling
falling
from the seventy foot floor

the next morning
egyptian mummy
something on fire
graves weeping
mist in the morning
two candles burning
etched warnings
in a green forest window
eternal sound on wood
bearskin comes alive
no cell phone
dreams of afternoons
at the beach
runaway dumbwaiters
infinate surrender
voices rise from beneath
tracing life
third world perspectives
dominating monsters
black ravins
men with no ears mouth or feet

I was wrong to drink that much

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2007-05-22 12:40 PM

My word, girl! I'd forgo the spirits if a night like that was to follow any libations! lol

May your dreams be lullaby sweet this night!

Even in your sleep you have a better imagination than most people! ~ At least I hope those images were from your fertile imagination!*!*!

Linda

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2007-05-22 12:49 PM

quite a 'write'!...

And I thought my (daily) 'nightmares' [courtesy of
(witnessed) fatal airplane and automobile crashes;
'jungle' warfare; street crime; etc.] were nasty?!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2007-05-22 01:01 PM

Oh, wow... are you more exhausted now than when you went to bed? *S*

Excellent!!!

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2007-05-22 01:20 PM

Haahaaa...
That's what you get!
I told you to be good!
What else did you do??
Huuummm??

Bad-Girl, Bad-Girl, watcha gonna do?
watch gonna do when they come for you?

Hug!

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2007-05-22 02:13 PM

LeeJ
That is what I call a Lala paloser. Watch what you drink.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

6 posted 2007-05-23 12:33 PM

so very good, so very good. " spirit helps make good poems". indeed, what did you drink that night?

a funny ending but very beautiful at words choosing. wonderful imaginations.

I love those verses
"playing cards
with
faraway songs
light rain
going past my room
notions under my bed
telling "me" i wasn't welcome?"...simply beautiful.

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