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A Sunny Day in a Storm
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A Sunny Day in a Storm |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England 
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A Sunny Day in a Storm The rain was thrashing at the trees, the wind was howling round. Muddy torrents swept along and flooded all the ground. “Mum, Mum, can I go out to play?” I heard my daughter say. “You what?” I cried, “I don’t think so,” “wait for a sunny day.” “I can see the sun,” she said, “It’s just behind the clouds.” “Oh please Mum, let me, let me now,” “why am I not allowed?” “I give up.” I then replied and shoved her through the door. Alas, she tripped and fell into... a puddle on the floor! She just looked up and laughed and laughed, her face was filled with glee. I wondered how I would have felt, if she’d done that to me. Then looking up I saw a ray, the Sun peeped through the clouds and looked at me as if to say, ”Well Mum…… am I allowed?” Ivor G Davies The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Sir, a very beautiful poem of childhood story. light,joyful and it is like sunbeam shine through my cloudy morning. see what a poem can do?? it in a cloudy day here. beautiful enjoyed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Rain, rain, please go away, So the girl can go out to play. There it is! ~ There's the sun! Now she can play and have some fun!  A charming story.  Linda |
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