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Open Poetry #40

3000 Reasons to Try

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2007-05-21 01:03 PM

                   is she that good lookin'

or just that good at cookin'?

why isn't the fact she's tookin' waving your yellow flag?

i know you're a fellow that needs her airbag

but shouldn't you be bookin'

                     out of Dodge

to a Dodge

                     you can drive?

                                                                your friend,

                                                                Dale Earnhardt, Jr

CHARLAX
Junior Member

since 2007-05-21

Posts 17
AZ,USA

1 posted 2007-05-21 02:24 PM

you have an incredible usage of languages

CHARLAX ici

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-05-21 03:18 PM

nice poem. It is a very good friendly advice to howardtsu who has written for years still has not been to win a heart. poor him!

very nice

enjoyed.

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

3 posted 2007-05-22 11:55 AM

thanks charlax

thanks drauntz

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