Open Poetry #40 |
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Itinerant Pulse |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Itinerant Pulse In baseline of life flows unconquerable will By the measure of telling would the strong heart be still Sunken eyes may betray of a loss to the core Yet in tribute lives on the resolve to explore Undeniable pain in the thread bare of hours There is ease to succumb where the darkness devours Though to stand facing North without burden of pride Courses planned by intention thus inherent inside Stutter start is the heart on a journey ingrained Where the humble must kneel as the sorrow is drained Spilled in rivers of love, set to rest and let pass Is that not as the law of perennial green grass This began in a heartbeat yet unaltered by time Still as strong in the drum of one love made divine At your side presses timeless every impulse so strong In the drum of forever there will I still belong Copyright Kkh 5/21/07 |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ 'Stutter start is the heart on a journey ingrained Where the humble must kneel as the sorrow is drained' I have come to the 'stutter start' so many times in my life ... I do Knee-A-Lize, as I attempt to drain the sorrow~ ![]() Such a soft pour of ink~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
many tremendous lines and 'images' such as: “In baseline of life flows unconquerable will…”; “Sunken eyes may betray of a loss to the core Yet in tribute lives on the resolve to explore…” ”Undeniable pain in the thread bare of hours…” Applause!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kathleen, sadly beautiful. ![]() |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Sunken eyes may betray of a loss to the core Yet in tribute lives on the resolve to explore" And this poem is a most beautiful and loving tribute. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Stutter start is the heart on a journey ingrained Where the humble must kneel as the sorrow is drained" could not pass these lines the first 4 times remarkable TD |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
"Spilled in rivers of love, set to rest and let pass Is that not as the law of perennial green grass " Excelent write. Kristabell "You are today where your thoughts have brought you; you will be tomorrow where your thoughts take you." James Lane Allen |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Stutter start is the heart on a journey ingrained Where the humble must kneel as the sorrow is drained" So true, so true. Love this line! JL ![]() Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sending a hug, knowing that you might need one about now.... Beautifully written, Kay...very beautifully |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
Yes, this is sadly beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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