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The Walk
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The Walk |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan 
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THE WALK With the steadiness of a heartbeat the gentle waves lapped against the shore. Feeling cool against the summer heat, giving hope of relief, nothing more. The delicate sand held our footprints; a temporary sign that we exist. The late sunset held a rosy tint, as over the water rolled a mist. From all of this beauty came a song, flowing within us played on heartstrings. Feelings like these could never be wrong, relishing the comfort that they bring. In that moment we truly were one. A love as glorious as the sun. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Paulette... nice name and nice poem! Look forward to reading more or your work Be well ... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful and again beautiful. The footprint the love and the love we need in our difficult time. enjoyed your beautiful poem |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
For an unabashed ‘incurable Romantic’ like me, this ‘write’ is most grand-fine (quintessential) “Romanticism”! Superb ‘imagery’… I especially LOVED: “The delicate sand held our footprints; a temporary sign that we exist. The late sunset held a rosy tint, as over the water rolled a mist.” MUCH long-sustained applause!! |
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