Blood stained stars(rewrite)

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Open Poetry #40

Blood stained stars(rewrite)

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

0 posted 2007-01-18 03:22 PM

Glassy fragments of past nightmares
blind justice from coin seeking eyes.
For this priceless element, lives are given.

Toddlers end up paying the price.
When they’ re working all hours in ditches seeking
shards of a sparkling curse.
Children can’t help their needs; they lose limbs just for wanting.
Gems, stained with beads of scarlet red.
Darken the light in Sierra Leone.
A single jewel found, causes insanity.
Civilians rush to the mines, only to
die for the value of A Diamond.

Takes fires from the forges of hell, to melt
the sharp rock. Soldiers break the people,
whipping them and massacring families in sight.
Forcing the mutilated children to find a priceless gem
that most of them will never see. Slipping slowly away.
Losing their homes so they fight for the military.

An uncut treasure, defined by the money it’s sold for.
Cold-hearted smugglers deal out the cards to play with weighted dice.
A boy without a beard, places the orders for the give and take of lives.
The lifeblood of those who died in vain is carried through to rings.
Haughty hands make a flipping motion in the air.
Constellations in the sky are got in the centerpiece
worn by the ones who don’t at all care.

Gold made through enslavement and murder manages to
get into the trade market for the stone that rightly belongs to none.
Crystal beams of light shine from the shiny stone, reflecting back
Through starry depths the pain of the crippled who have just begun.
Fortunes paid to traffickers, twist the plot around, lives of vassals change.
Dominant little pebble valued at the highest market price, cutting open healed scars. Preschoolers die for the rebels’ ice. Sacrifice and mutilated amputations mark Sierra Leone’s Diamond Wars.

outlawthunder
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 67

1 posted 2007-04-10 09:15 PM

Bravo!

Well structured, written,
and holding back no punches.

OUTLAWTHUNDER

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