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WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218


0 posted 2007-05-18 10:37 PM


Be free to let life run
as a wild horse
over grasslands and hills;
Be free to let life walk
as a turtle
on white sands or parched earth;
Be free to let life jump
as a dolphin,
over waves of passing storms;
Be free to let life rest
as a wild flower,
with its petals dampened with dew
on a misty spring morning.

Be free!

© Copyright 2007 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-05-18 10:49 PM


this is absolutely beautiful. what a poem of happy life.

beautiful, simply beautiful.

so good!

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
2 posted 2007-05-19 09:31 AM


a most fine 'write'!

[guess I'm the "free turtle (walking over)
  parched earth..."]

sustained applause!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2007-05-21 06:47 PM


Very well done.
Thanks Windwalker

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
4 posted 2007-05-21 11:10 PM



oh yes WindWalker!


Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29
Posts 678
Portland, OR
5 posted 2007-05-21 11:46 PM


Thanks for the reminder. A nice write.

Kristabell

"You are today where your thoughts have brought you; you will be tomorrow where your thoughts take you." James Lane Allen

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