Open Poetry #40 |
Into Flame |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
"if you plant a demon seed you raise a flower on fire" U2 If you take a seed and water it with flame and fire it will grow stronger every day with passion and desire slow the petals bloom softly, smooth and curved an ember glows from being nurtured finally pushing through the earthly restrain until turning, burning... bursting into flame. seek the flame within yourself and let your soul be cleansed by the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely penned Donna. In the midst of winter, |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
and yet hot at the same time gentle Donna I love it... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your pen's afire, contessa poetessa! Linda |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
finally pushing through the earthly restrain until turning, burning... bursting into flame. Spiritual poetry aligned with nature is always a pleasure to read, Ivor The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last. |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Wow I really liked this..Awsome!! |
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Behind the Wall New Member
since 2007-01-19
Posts 4USA |
beautiful... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Wow, thanks so much everyone. I heard that line over lunch and this is what bloomed from it. Thanks and hugs. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Beautiful write. JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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The_Nameless_One Member
since 2007-01-20
Posts 165Missouri |
undeniable excellence |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
nothing like as good spark to ignite the fire of a lifetime. I like this ALOT!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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