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andrey
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since 2007-04-27
Posts 29


0 posted 2007-05-17 07:42 AM


Thank you for this life
Thank you for the food
Thank you for being there
When they acted so rude

Thank you for the trust
Thank you for your love
Thank you for the roof
That is above

Thank your for my heavenly childhood
I know how much you served
Thank you for beating the crap out of me
As I always deserved

This is for you mom
And please tell dad too
Thank you for reminding me
How much I hate you

This is for you dad
And please tell mom too
Thank you for reminding me
How much I hate you

[This message has been edited by andrey (05-18-2007 02:04 PM).]

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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2007-05-17 11:34 AM


Pretty sad stuff here
Good poem to bring out the emotion I feel right now.

Alison

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-05-17 04:40 PM


My Dad was abusive to his children at times, and there came a time when I realized that not only was I angry with him but I was angry with my Mom for not intervening in a more positive manner...she seemed to accept him as he was...and her children suffered as a result...
irregardless of the things we suffered as children, we can create our world based upon the solid priciples of love, caring, acceptance and forgiveness...a worthy struggle that will benefit us and those affected by us...James

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
3 posted 2007-05-17 06:27 PM


You could have signed it..."HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY"???
suthern
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
4 posted 2007-05-18 04:28 PM


Major ouch... not all parents are to be celebrated.

Just remember... you can't change them but you can break the cycle.

Welcome to Passions!!!

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