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Dancing Night
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Dancing Night |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
The inspiration for this poem is found at the following link /pip/Forum103/HTML/002810.html Ruth, I am in awe of your poem and had to try my hand at this style. Dancing Nights Quiet inspires me to write I compose poems in the night Flirting and dancing Northern Lights within my sights. Within my sights. Bright colors blaze across black sky Tantalizing as they drift by Churning, burning in knots they tie they fly so high. They fly so high. Ticking clock reminds me to sleep Nagging 'bout the hours I keep Price of nocturnal writing steep i should count sheep. I should count sheep. But, I embrace the peace of night All sensibility takes flight As I gaze at Aurora bright my world set right. My world set right Sleep calls my name most bossily Lying in bed is where I'll be Magical lights are all I see they enfold me. They enfold me … Alison |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
it is a very beautiful one, Alison!! A fine poem! enjoyed as always! |
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scarletbegonias Member
since 2007-05-15
Posts 59 |
you are ever so awesome and im ever so glad you are my friend. the poem is simply lovely <3 |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
this is beeyooteeful, Ali  think you could send a muse or two to me on loaner? Mine seem to be on an extended vacation again ~Sheli By words the mind is winged |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
I read these words and so adore That through each verse, I wanted more And as I read, the treat was mine The words so fine, the words so fine Much enjoyed my friend, thanks for the sharing of a new style today. Rick |
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