Open Poetry #40 |
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Koln Concert Reverie |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia ![]() |
Koln Concert Reverie He pounds the keys, hitting deep inside bringing me to my knees in a fetal centering, begging for more please, more please as evocative trills sublimely cascade down the heart-walls, enraptured ears hear celestial notes rarely conceived by earthlings. Then he leaves me in profound silence; lingering notes dangling in mid air like some dove or hang-glider sensing a moment of magnificence. I escape the confines of earth, soar high in the skies beyond the reach of all the mud and mundane machinations humans wrap themselve up with before turning out the night-light, believing all is well as the globe spins itself faster and faster toward Hell. Is it any wonder I choose to wrap myself tight in a cocoon of musical musings each night? *thanking Keith Jarrett* |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beauiful "He pounds the keys, hitting deep inside" tells all enjoyed |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I was captivated by the beauty of your expression - the intensity of the writing - and how wonderfully you wove it all together. Wonderful! Alison |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...I don't believe its the globe...just the ants upon it...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
This is REALLY ‘good stuff’!: “evocative trills sublimely cascade down the heart-walls”; “... notes dangling in mid air... sensing a moment of magnificence.”; “I escape the confines of earth… beyond the reach of all the mud and mundane machinations” serious, sustained applause! |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I really like this poem, specially this stanza!!!! "I escape the confines of earth, soar high in the skies beyond the reach of all the mud and mundane machinations humans wrap themselve up with before turning out the night-light, believing" |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
No wonder whatsoever. *S* Beautiful write... your words let us hear! *S* |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Speechlessly floating on the music you painted. - Owl |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
THANK YOU, dear poet friends! I listened to Keith Jarrett's CD today (for about the thousandth time) and was once again transported to another realm. |
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