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Open Poetry #40

Lost

Jenna
Member

since 2007-03-20

Posts 180

0 posted 2007-05-12 10:54 AM

I say your name
it carries on the wind
drifting away
further
out of sight.
It lands
but I dont know where,
I look through the hazy fog
struggle through the darkness
attempting to find some light,
just a flicker will do.
I push past it
walk on
take a guess
an idea of where you will be.
I think that I find it
this place is familar
I reach for it,
hold tight
yet it slips out of my hand
like lily dust.
I look again
closer
only to find
that theres nothing left

you're gone.

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2007-05-12 04:55 PM

*sigh* almost like a dream that fades away the minute we try to capture it...An emotional poem...well written...*Big Hugs*

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2007-05-12 09:08 PM

sigh here too

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-05-15 05:53 PM

Nice writing...may love be given and returned in kind...plant seeds...James

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

4 posted 2007-05-15 06:42 PM

a bit different today. You wrote in a very soft tune. love this too.

enjoyed.

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