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Bedfellow |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite: Bedfellow Thoughts equate a weeping willow Liquate like lace upon my pillow Like feathers of a snow white dove In flares of radiance of love And glistening dew glows like stars Surrounded by the black of tar Sweeping blaze into my eyes Anesthetize and hypnotize The willows have become a part Tentacles deep in my heart Visiting me a nightly seem Deep within a nightly dream I cannot separate the two The willow and my thoughts of you Both have formed fair opulence An overpowering sentience A Punchinello bedfellow Weeping willow and my pillow |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Seymour, this is just beautiful. As always! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick Thank you so much. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady Thank you my dear. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Softly spoken...beautifully said...I love the vision it wove...*Big Hugs* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime55 Thank you for the read and nice comment. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Love this Sy  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Thank you sweetie.  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I cannot separate the two The willow and my thoughts of you" tonight I believe these lines were written just for me such a mood you have set Sir Sy |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
this is a very beautiful poem love, sir. It is very beautiful and quiet. may you have a wonderful Sunday, Sir Tabin. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady They are yours since you claimed them.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz A sweet comment, thank you. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
This poem is among my all time favorites. It is sheer beauty. Thank you. Alison |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
what an absolutely beautiful piece of poetry. this was wonderful. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Alison, A delightful comment, thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
paullallady, Thank you, thank you. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I have a image of you sitting under the willow in you garden or perhaps in a park somewhere. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Moon Dust Good image, thank you for the read. |
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