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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-05-11 06:23 PM



In Failure

In failure,
a source of pain
is found.
In failure,
disappointments
can abound.
In failure, dark dungeons
seem to surround
In failure,
thoughts within the mind
can take you down,
or can motivate you
to do better the next
time around.

JamesLee
11May
2007



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2007-05-11 07:11 PM


JamesMichael~
Grandmother said, "You haven't failed,
you just haven't got it quite right yet."

We do learn ... and keep on keeping on~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


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Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2007-05-11 07:25 PM


JamesMichael
Interesting read, enjoyed the write.

Drauntz
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3 posted 2007-05-11 07:48 PM


oh, it is very said. We say 'failure is the biological mother of success' so if mother is here, the son will soon follow.'

very smooth and powerful teaching.

enjoyed as always.

aziza
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4 posted 2007-05-12 12:20 PM


Some of the most important lessons are learned when we think we have failed.  Right?  Good write, James.

Thank you.
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5 posted 2007-05-12 08:48 PM


neat write James


JamesMichael
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6 posted 2007-05-13 09:48 PM


Thank you Marge, Seymour, Drauntz, aziza and passing for the nice remarks...
The real failure is failing to recover...James

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