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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2007-05-11 04:05 PM



     Word Garland
      ~*Marge Tindal*~

   ~ Gently strung
           worded pearls
                Soft surround
                    in gentle swirls~

                            ~ Gifting of
                    the sifting of
             thoughts in regale
           Worded string
         of thoughtful
       things
     on this
   worded impale~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2007 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
sandgrain
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1 posted 2007-05-11 04:37 PM


Your words are like pearls of gentleness  creating a treasure, Marge.

  Rae

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2 posted 2007-05-11 05:01 PM


I want put all your soft words into my pillow so I could have sweet dreams or just hug it when i wake up.

soft and sweet and a life lesson between the lines.

always beautiful

many hugs and love

[This message has been edited by Drauntz (05-11-2007 05:34 PM).]

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3 posted 2007-05-11 05:35 PM


Marge,

Got your book today....

Now I have to find time to enjoy it!

Ivor

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*jealous*
so cool how you do what you do

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5 posted 2007-05-11 06:16 PM


Yes very cool Marge!
Just keep on what you're doing!!
Love this one...and you too!

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2007-05-11 07:31 PM


Marge,
You are a delight.

Verbena
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7 posted 2007-05-11 07:54 PM


Dear Marge

You can string me a 'Word Garland' anytime!  Wonderful!

Love Verbena xo


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8 posted 2007-05-11 09:41 PM


Thank you Marge
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9 posted 2007-05-12 12:34 PM


Dear Marge:  This is lovely!  I always enjoy your work, in any form!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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As Eliza Doolittle says ...

Loverly

Sums it up for me.

A

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11 posted 2007-05-12 12:35 PM


You are so creatively artistic.  Love, Joyce
Marge Tindal
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     Word Garland Reply
      ~*Marge Tindal*~

   ~ Each of you
           are so kind
                As to let
                    my word garland find

                            a place to land
                    in gentle hands
             held by friends
           of blessed knowing
         always going
       one step beyond
     the friendship
   that lives on~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com

Startime55
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13 posted 2007-05-12 04:46 PM


BRAVO!!!..this poem is an absolute delight to read...the perfect break from my making jam and pies today...Sending you loving thoughts...*Big Hugs*
Betty
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14 posted 2007-05-12 04:57 PM


I love this. You are so creative!
The Lady
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15 posted 2007-05-12 11:52 PM



absolutely delightful
I want to wear it around my neck

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16 posted 2007-05-13 04:23 PM


I think, dear Marge, that you are happy when you do these especially creative poems and this happiness comes through and becomes a true gift for the reader.

Yes, delightful!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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17 posted 2007-05-13 07:32 PM


this is wonderful.  The flow of the words was so gentle and so meaningful.
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18 posted 2007-05-14 11:40 AM


Marge, you have some amazing talent.
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19 posted 2007-05-14 12:08 PM


Margie girl, darling one this is without doubt one of your golden pieces, its touch across my soul is beautiful, and oh the way you spin a line into magic. I love it utterly, utterly, utterly. What can I say but this is utterly divine. The images this conjures are perfect. I’ve not been here for far too long but your writing always draws me further in.

I’m actually struggling with an essay that has to be in too soon for comfort, and believe me it is a struggle. Rousseau is not my beau ideal, nor for that matter is Jacques Louis David whom I consider, tried to butter his bread on both sides. Not that I’m allowed to say so of course, I have to sculpt elegant phrases about the line and form of his dreary painting and discuss the revolutionary connotations of his works. So now you know why I’m here instead of writing the essay.  
Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy
x x x x x x x

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

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20 posted 2007-06-20 12:07 PM


colorfully creative.

Hugs Kimberly


SmartChick
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21 posted 2007-06-20 12:52 PM


I love it when you display your talent with words.
Marge Tindal
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22 posted 2007-07-19 01:11 PM



Rut-roh ... me got some thankee's to hand out ... and I DO to each of you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -     noles1@totcon.com   

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