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Open Poetry #40

There's no saving her

thacuteone_09
New Member

since 2007-05-09

Posts 7

0 posted 2007-05-11 03:40 PM

Can't you see her dying
You kill her with your words..
And don't you hear her crying
Your yelling makes it worse!

MindBodySoul
Member

since 2007-01-10

Posts 196
NJ

1 posted 2007-05-11 04:46 PM

Wow!!!

The impact... the conviction ... so much truth in it..

In the heat of the moment words arent measured, and most are deaf to the screaming. Not knowing the damamge they are really doing...
How I understand this so well...

Thank you for sharing..
an immediate connection to your words

Jen--->MindBodySoul

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2007-05-13 09:53 PM

Nice...James

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

3 posted 2007-05-14 12:46 PM

Words from someone's mother in law.

life is not fair, not fair to her.

sympathy, sympathy we cry loud

enjoyed

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2007-05-14 08:39 AM

Sometimes it's not what is said that's important it's the way it is said as you so eloquently point out.
Good job.

a good commitee can decimate communication.

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