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That Cloud.... |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
 I used to feel…. emotion in your words It made me feel….. as if walking in a cloud But something happened I must of fallen off your cloud Must of turned you off some how I no longer see those words Like I used to see them then What made you turn so cold I’ve yet to understand Just the memory of that cloud Is what keeps me hoping still For one day to get it back But never losing sight That I may never get it back Always thought you'd never change Thought thispromised, you would keep That consistency would always be No surprise was this to me… I sometimes need that cloud but its just wishful thinking detachment is the feeling As if purposely derailing me As if teaching me a lesson that loving is a weakness Warmth you show me still when you spoon me in your sleep We now lay on that one cloud That I used to ride alone… Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
my dear Jen, a beautiful poem and a warm painting. Along life, sometime we do need to let ourselves imagine that some one is holding us, rocking us, pampering us and spoiling us. the dream or the heavenly love. May you be well loved and pampered. again , a beautiful and very emotional poem. I wish I can let my feelings flow out like that. most of the time, i cling on my silly logic. take care and wish you a very good and happy night |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
interesting 'write'! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
A beautiful poem. |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
My calm center, my inner refuge and anchorage, my quiet place of tranquility and solace, my magic well from which I draw the courage and strength to batter through this veil of tears. She, my inner muse, the only one who, though the world might do its worst, will never, ever leave me, because she is my Life, my soul. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely! |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
"Warmth you show me still when you spoon me in your sleep We now lay on that one cloud That I used to ride alone…" Very nice poem |
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