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Open Poetry #40
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2007-05-08 09:37 PM

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Only one— cherry blossom—
Yet how sad its falling
Through Spring rain


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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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1 posted 2007-05-08 10:18 PM

the sadness is well said while i am happily waiting for the cheery.

The beauty of sadness of yours is  to sigh elegantly and gracefully
secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2007-05-11 01:37 PM

v. fine!
aziza
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3 posted 2007-05-11 11:24 PM

Sometimes beauty is found
in one lone cherry blossom
and sometimes it is found
in thoughts simply expressed.

Thank you.
Alison
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4 posted 2007-05-12 09:05 PM

lovely
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