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Castello 93 |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Night songs float toward a promise of consummation with waltzing light on the ceiling Deep baritone blankets like velvet water followed by a chaser of colorful illustrations Cradled memories woven in the comfort of his smell and the warmth of his arms He is forever held captive amid wisps of floating lace ... Alison |
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anam_cara76 Junior Member
since 2007-05-06
Posts 24USA |
I've always loved your work and this is right up to what I've come to expect when reading your work. I look forward to more... |
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The_Nameless_One Member
since 2007-01-20
Posts 165Missouri |
it's good |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
it is very good poem to romanticize of smoking. good poem but bad behave... I have to say. And I am in awe of your pen name. Quite a declamation of standing between the beginnings and ends. interesting!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. So politically incorrect You bad bad girl . . . Thank you John . . |
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