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| Open Poetry #40 |
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Future Kisses |
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Grinch Member Elite
since 2005-12-31
Posts 2929Whoville |
I’ve seen the future in my madness Dance its fingers through my hair Drag me to the edge of never And hold me screaming there. All the faceless ghosts of maybe Cracking smiles into a frown Draw me closer to forever Then slowly drag me down. Today is raining on tomorrow See the droplets in my eyes? Glistening they spell my fortune Who'll kiss them into lies? |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I can't single out one or two lines gripped me. They all held me hostage to your poem. Wow. A |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
love, let the love out. mad but madly in love. cool down. is she the right girl? enjoyed. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh I do like the images in this one. And unlike my stuff, which does one image and then embroiders on it, you do image,image,image; and then your language is evocative and spare, also. Very well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
sad!!! again. |
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