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Open Poetry #40

Pete

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-05-06 06:40 PM

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And just what did you expect
In the aftermath
My fine young friend

A pack of cigarettes
Would have been nice
Given as now
It couldn’t possibly make
All that much difference
I replied

And he looked at me
With more than a little surprise
Then reached in his pocket
For what was inside

And said
There you go

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Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-05-06 09:10 PM

"And just what did you expect
In the aftermath
My fine young friend"

aftermath...what a fine professional talk! then it is the poem time...wait, light it. let cigarettes smokes the thought out so one could write some good poems of sorrow.

still good poem. l like the free-confidence tune.

have a very good evening, sir!!

[This message has been edited by Drauntz (05-06-2007 10:23 PM).]

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