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A Check on my Soul
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A Check on my Soul |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite, repost: A Check on my Soul Once more I open up the door To look into my soul once more To take a taste and stir the blend Its simmer to a proper end A kettle full of oddities With salt and pepper fantasies A hissing magic mediate Cooking into ideate There seems no small ingredient To make a soul expedient For soul transcends the time of toll And waits for you another whole Each single life but links a claim To anchor down the solid aim And chaos turns to sense once more For it to blossom evermore That flower that the soul will be Forever in eternity |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
And chaos turns to sense once more For it to blossom evermore I can't wait for that day touching write Sy |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Each time I come into these pages so blue, and read your beautiful poetry, it touches my heart. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Me too sweetie. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick You are a dear.  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I am very fond of: “…I open up the door To look into my soul once more To take a taste and stir the blend…”; “…salt and pepper fantasies…”; “…For soul transcends the time of toll…” and, in particular, the ending: “That flower that the soul will be Forever in eternity(!)” Applause! (most enjoyable ‘read’!) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet Thank you a most enjoyable comment. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Ahh, dear Seymour, to be aware of this wonderful truth, makes everything easy... or at least easier! I know your soul through your words and its eternal beauty shines through always, because of the depth of your writings. Enjoy your Sunday, dear Seymour, wonderful soul poet. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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The_Nameless_One Member
since 2007-01-20
Posts 165Missouri |
It's great to be able to read your wonderful poetry again wonderful write Seymour as always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita A very kind reply thank you dear. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
The_Nameless_One Thank you for the read and nice reply. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
"Each single life but links a claim To anchor down the solid aim And chaos turns to sense once more For it to blossom evermore That flower that the soul will be Forever in eternity" what a wonderful preach!! the beautified fruit. a very serious poem, Sir. enjoyed have a wonderful Sunday night. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz Thank you, you are very kind. |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Seymour, To annalise the soul of man take knowledge from 'when time began' and then to put it all in verse a skill unique, but what is worse, or even something none can do, whatever gifts God gave to you this task would leave you in a twirl ...to understand the soul of girl! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ivordavies You are absolutely right. Thanks for the reminder. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Greetings, Sir T! Thy soul be a lotus blossom baring sweet secrets with the unfolding of each 'poetical' petal.  EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Very sweet, thank you. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Each single life but links a claim To anchor down the solid aim And chaos turns to sense once more For it to blossom evermore That flower that the soul will be Forever in eternity" Just big grins, Sy & a big *hug*, too.....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Love the grins and especially the hugs. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
beautiful ending Sir Sy "That flower that the soul will be Forever in eternity" for the poem and for life... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Thank you sweetie. |
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