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Dawn Haiku |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Dawn Haiku Sunbeams spindle-dance through the wisped and ragged mist for the morning star! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet, Good one. |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
A poem as fragile as life itself. I especially like the phrase “spindle-dance”. We’ve all seen that delicate vision, but it takes a poet to put a name to it. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very very lovely! Allow me to answer your haiku with one of mine Messengers of dawn the bird’s song and the sun’s kiss make love to our Earth Love, Margherita  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
SUPERB 'Haiku' "answer" !!...thank you for posting such a grand-fine 'reply'! |
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The_Nameless_One Member
since 2007-01-20
Posts 165Missouri |
sounds like a great morning to wake up to its rainy where I am for the next week |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
good. very beautiful. enjoyed. |
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