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Don’s Cossack Dance
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Don’s Cossack Dance |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Now that she’s dead She’s become Something of a shrine The friends she had And they in truth Were very few Have found themselves Now over the latter years Increasingly in a crowd Of course she had skill Which in each year or two Being with nothing For her at all to do Could make a poem No one who was here and over then Feels comfortable at all reflecting on All those out of no where arguments We always seemed to have Of course it was difficult at the end Yet now with a lover just down the road I’ve actually found my afterward Not all that hard . [This message has been edited by Huan Yi (05-05-2007 08:40 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I was attracted by the title, because I love Cossack Dance (last time I tried to ignore that years had passed since my last "performance" I badly fell on my sacred bone (coccige) ... it took my breath away literally!). As usual your poetical performance is a high level one. Love, Margherita  |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
a satisfied sigh of sighing statuesquely a sigh of sadness. enjoyed as usual. [This message has been edited by Drauntz (05-07-2007 01:49 AM).] |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Interesting as always! |
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