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prisms also catch the light, not only reflect it |
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threadsofyou New Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 3 |
You've been dead for years in realms so unreal to you Try though I did, I simply couldn't reach you It's not at all fair to blame you although I will admit, I do There was just so much you couldn't have and you probably never knew Now all I have are memories mysteries and fantasies Never resolved, lies and tears endless fears ...and just fractured pieces -of you I wonder if you carried tiny fragments of me If they wore you down the way they have completely worn through me Reverberating damages... pockets (and heart) full of debris "Love" wrapped in bandages did you also bleed? Whatever may have happpened those slivers of the past won't allow me to be cold so it breaks my heart to know that of all things... ...you died alone... I wonder if you had the time the conscience or the capacity of mind to realize that time was slowing down and winding to an end did you cry out to god, your mother or your soon-vanished "friend"? I cradle my best memory of you -for comfort ...still cannot understand cannot believe she'll never see your face or hold your hand never hear her cry out "Daddy" who will walk her down the aisle? who will answer all her questions when she's no longer a child??? could you at least picture her in your mind did you perhaps whisper her name? did you tell her daddy loves her? did it anguish you the same to know what our little girl has lost? what you've done cannot be undone and now, look at the cost a blessing and a burden solely mine to bear although it's been this way all along cuz you were never there I can't help to blame you I Know... it isn't fair. X- Threads-of-You |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
this is soooooo beautiful. Only a decent heart can sing out this kind of song. very touching. touch deeply. The first half, 'I' talked to "her". the last half 'I' is self-talking. you="I" . very typical for a sad heart. [This message has been edited by Drauntz (05-01-2007 10:05 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
amazing. what a fantastic entrance!  Welcome to Pip |
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threadsofyou New Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 3 |
thank you. I'm very excited to find such an active forum. *sigh* already feels like home |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions. Outstanding first post here. TD |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Prisms reveal the layers and depth of the multi-dimensional facets of both the writer and his/her subject. This was truly a poignant multi-faceted write. Welcome to Passions. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Threads~ WELCOME to PiP ! 'I cradle my best memory of you -for comfort' To hold the best of the memories is what we all must do~ You will come to know some fine folks here~ Read and reply to the works of others and share even more of your pennings~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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