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Hula Hoop and Tree
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Hula Hoop and Tree |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Solemn tree by the lake, Won’t you come and play? Take a dip and cool with ease, Effortlessly today. The sun sneaks behind you Soon, casting line to wave, Casting you in softness, Turned in reverse display. Slick and glazed, your protégé, Your twin and 'most admired' Will float in length across the lake, Leg kicked up, not tired. An emerging fish will draw a ring. A hula-hoop, it’ll be; The encircling ripples, then, will encompass dancing tree. The day will end too soon, So, won’t you play with me? Dive right in, the temp's just right for hula hoop and tree. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Misc, you succeeded to put two favorites of mine in the title and how you combined them is simply MAGICAL! So absolutely captivating and in a way poignant. Who could resist to such an invitation to come out to play? I think you were in a blessed moment of inspiration to write this. I will keep it, for I love it! Love and ... hula hoop hugs. Margherita  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
An emerging fish will draw a ring. A hula-hoop, it’ll be; The encircling ripples, then, will encompass dancing tree. I do so love this Thank you. A |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I love this . Refreshing, and just what I need right now. Freedom to go out to play.Thanks for the dip. martyjo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, the girlie girl in me would love to play with the girlie girl in you! Fun in the sun is the order of the day! What a delightful read! You're a pet!  Loves 'n hugs Linda |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
this is a beautiful good morning to me. I love the cheerful mood. enjoyed. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a magical delight of a write... just what I needed this morning! *S* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
delightful and magical...very much enjoyed this whimsical tune...well done  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Thank you, Everyone! I'm so glad this was refreshing to you. Not so much to me because I have a science project due soon on "reflection", and I just can't seem to get into doing it! (Too much other stuff on my mind, I suppose!) So... thought I'd try to imagine it and write about it first! Thanks for your feedback. Maybe it'll spur me on to get busy with my project, eh? Again, thanks, miscellanea |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
hope you project's coming along this was great especially today 92 degrees already I needed that dip!  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Thanks, Lady. Well, at least I've gathered the materials; that's a start... Thanks for the boost. miscellanea |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
MisC....I read this the other day and am just now getting around to posting. I really like this....makes me miss home, too. *hugs*...jo |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
I have read this several times - and loved it every time - more playing that is what we need! Paul |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
WOW....This is a wonderful poem. So creative and just.....wow....I read this five times...lol |
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