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Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

0 posted 2007-04-30 01:13 PM

My white roses
Stained and wet
By overflowing
Of sky

I try
With all songs of spring
To rinse them dry.

So
At the end of summer
With all those smiles
Someone will not cry

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-04-30 01:19 PM

Such a beauty! I am deeply touched.

Will keep this, it is precious.

Love,
Margherita

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2007-04-30 02:15 PM

This touches me in so many ways... I can't explain, but I can thank you for it... and I do. *S* Thank you!!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-04-30 03:34 PM

very neat write

MindBodySoul
Member

since 2007-01-10

Posts 196
NJ

4 posted 2007-04-30 05:51 PM

Wow... so beautiful!

Such tenderness reflected in your words.. It is a touching piece

Thank you for sharing

Jen--->MindBodySoul

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2007-04-30 05:59 PM

There is an enigma in this...that such a brevity of words can create so many strong images. I like it a lot. Thank you.

a good commitee can decimate communication.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

6 posted 2007-05-01 02:10 AM

Beautiful! A microcosm of perfection!

- Owl

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2007-05-01 11:25 AM

A gem of a little write.

~ May roses forever bloom in the garden of your heart!

EA

TerryW
Senior Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA

8 posted 2007-05-01 03:48 PM

Drauntz,
Dear friend, with poetry this good, you may make ME cry! Lovely!

Thanks so much for sharing!

~Terry

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

9 posted 2007-05-01 08:05 PM

Drauntz...Tenderly written as the petals on a rose. Enjoyed...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2007-05-01 08:09 PM

Enjoyed...James

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

11 posted 2007-05-02 12:47 PM

a poem like this
can make me cry...

beauty!

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