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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Especially By: Noah Eaton 4/29/07 …your velvet whispers, make me dream myself awake, which I partake, until my heart breaks, wishing, waiting… …only a look and a voice, upon the ocean of life, that’s how it feels, in my heart sometimes, searching, for you… If I was asked, why sunsets have their vibrancy, ten years ago, my mind would fill, with uncertainty, but now I know, loneliness adds beauty to life, because your eyes sparkle like the twilight, and that’s what hurts, especially. …how can I explain, this feeling inside of me, frequently missing you, when we have yet to meet, do you, know what I mean… …I’m tired of hearing, the echoes of my own thoughts, I want to hear your heart beat, when I’m overwrought, listening skillfully… When an old friend, said it won’t be soon before long, I found myself feeling strong, now it feels as though, soon has prolonged, wondering where we belong, and it feels to me, all my dreams of you were really memories, and that’s what hurts, especially. All my fantasies, keep shape shifting into alternate realities, where you visit me in my sleep, breathing your vitality, cradled in the spaces, between each unspoken heartbeat, feeling your hair caress my face, ebbing over me like a swelling sea. If I was asked, why sunsets have their vibrancy, ten years ago, my mind would fill, with uncertainty, but now I know, even when I don’t know your name, and I feel so ashamed, that I haven’t reached you, convince you my love is tried and true, feeling all these regrets, you can’t tell me apart from these silhouettes, and that’s what hurts, especially. Sweet angel, still missing you, is what hurts especially, sweet angel, still missing you, is what hurts especially, sweet angel, still missing you, is what hurts especially, sweet angel, still missing you, is what hurts especially... "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" Mother Teresa |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Noah  you are such a sweet young man...you have this huge heart... "and it feels to me, all my dreams of you were really memories, and that’s what hurts, especially" I can't wait to read your poetry then, when you find her, or when she finds you...  |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
wow, very nicely done. Seems heartwrench is a fatal "disease" going around right now. I suppose this is what is meant by patience is a virtue. Great write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May the paths of Mistletoe Angel and his sweet angel, soon cross! That will surely give the other angels in heaven something to sing about! I know this Earthy 'Angel' will be rejoicing!  A lovely heart spill from your angel feather quill. Linda |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
This was beautiful |
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