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carter07
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since 2007-04-26
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0 posted 2007-04-28 01:56 PM

Constant smile
Slightest touch
Making memories that are loved so much
Hating the wait
Loving the ride
Caught up in the rush inside
Every moment
Every breath
Makes it impossible for death
Knowing safety
Inviting insomnia
Lost in a world of deliria
Scared but ready
Giving all
Regardless of how hard the fall
A defining moment
then i stand
holding paradise in my hand.

If anyone has a better idea for a title please let me know!

[This message has been edited by carter07 (04-28-2007 08:26 PM).]
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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
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1 posted 2007-04-28 09:16 PM

I read several times and I felt that it is a love poem but i may have misunderstand so I did not reply.

do please write more!
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2 posted 2007-04-28 09:30 PM

it makes for smiles... the title is just right, it does sound like a love affair!
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