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Hypersensitive |
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andrey Junior Member
since 2007-04-27
Posts 29 |
Sarcastically ill Oh Yeah I thing I’ve got it It makes me wanna kill And nothing seems to stop it Poison in the air There’s nothing I can steal You’re just reading words Nothing is for real Hypersensitive It never made me cry Searching all my life They told me not to try Why should I even bother If she told me to go and die |
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MannyNelemi New Member
since 2007-04-27
Posts 9Houston |
very dark...good rhyming |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
very good one. make me think. "Why should I even bother If she told me to go and die"...strength. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I can't believe someone would really tell you to go and die????? But admire your ability to face reality, and go forward.... vivid expression |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
very sad, personal and touching. you did a great job with this. |
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andrey Junior Member
since 2007-04-27
Posts 29 |
Thank you all for your support! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Andrey. Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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