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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
 Jen--->MindBodySoul [This message has been edited by MindBodySoul (04-26-2007 10:21 PM).] |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Well clicking the x was a bust . |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Jen does not show anything, will you repost or show the link. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Jen do please post your poem in the reply so I can read it. It is hard to read. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Is that who you are or wish you were panting . |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Jen, this is very beautiful poem. very emotional. It is rain or rain for spirit (as good poems, songs, books) all can clean our minds and life up the soul to a higher level. enjoyed the poem and the picture of the lady in red. |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
Huan Yi~ It is who I am... That is me in that picture.... not who I wish to be... It was taken at my cabin... while I was enjoying nature... and taking in its tranquility... The poem is a reflection of my state of mind at that moment.... Drauntz~ I find tranquility in expression, in art, in reading a book... or other peoples words... The rain is my one of my favorites, other than writing.. Thank you so much for your words Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
what a beautiful, descriptive poem. marvelous. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I too find the rain cleansing and thunder storms even more so...you write your feelings beautifully...a delightful read...*Big Hugs* |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I'm not one easily given to lavishing major 'compliments'.... but, I find this 'write' truely SUPERB! [grandly emotive...finely stated!] much, MUCH applause!! I too love the rain.... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I don't often 'double comment' on a write... but, I hope this 'reply' post brings this poem back to the top of the 'P.I.P.' queue so that, hopefully...more folks will notice and read it! v. fine write! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It's a bit difficult to read your words (I guess the resolution is different on different computers... or maybe I'm just old? *G*) I know some poets have solved this dilemma by reposting the poem part of the presentation directly beneath... maybe something to consider? That said... it's more than worth the effort... This is superb!!! |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
Thank you ... i will be reposting this poem soon... with the picture... but the words will be more on the surface.. not blended into the picture. It will be easier to read.. I do enjoy the rain so much.... Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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