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tonight I am yours
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tonight I am yours |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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my beloved radiant heat staggering mindless bloated opulence all consuming calling sighing wandering thoughts alive and blushing body sweet footsteps thirsting unfathomable depth contain my creation upon your endless sea where I oft go collecting primevil shells deep longing for your child I have fallen off a cliff so intensely I might hold you to tightly whispering over & over again soft "I love you's" nibbling your ear drifting drifting to an ocean of timelessness wide eyed warriors we become some roaring fire unafraid in love with love endless thoughts our nervena soul love naked free that eccentric painting of endless grains of sand eternal companion who dances a fearless universe gazing into fiery eyes I am but a mere destitute thread suffering leaps into sunlite arms oh for the sweetness of a lonely whippoorwhill what else is there? I am your harlot of thought your hide & seek of wine it is the now of moments not what we've left behind nor tomorrows having tasted love we are boundless ravenous souls drifting on some cosmic stream a grace beyond eternity inner spheres consuming atoms that we no longer care to contain have you wept tears of deepest affection? I've known those tears those frozen smiles ear to ear feeling safe & warm in whispers of desire in these years inseparable bound to play finding self speaking without words you promise I believe arising blissful realizations timeless ground our genesis of formless jewels we invent nature grasping out of body warmth I am your feminine belief you my colorful wide-eyed leaflet we whisper manuscripts of rumi dance with me my love before the inner sphere of night grows mature come errrrrrrr my love close your eyes for tonight I am utterly yours |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Absolutely Beautiful! "I am your harlot of thought your hide & seek of wine it is the now of moments not what we've left behind nor tomorrows having tasted love we are boundless ravenous souls" Such imagery, and such depth of feeling! What an excellent way to start the day! ~Terry ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Gawsh ! ::gulp:: You read my mind ::smiles:: ::bows:: |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Wow lady.....love the depths of you viewed in this outstanding piece. LOVELY |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
Wow!!! The passion and intensity in your words.... amazing! felt every emotion... I have been here before, "drifting on some cosmic stream a grace beyond eternity inner spheres consuming atoms that we no longer care to contain have you wept tears of deepest affection? I've known those tears those frozen smiles ear to ear feeling safe & warm in whispers of desire in these years inseparable bound to play finding self speaking without words" Your words took me back to that time in my life.... Thank you for reminding me... that such passion can be a realistic thought....  Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you promise I believe that sums it up....  M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thats all we want...James |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Your poetry amazes me and I loved this one so much. It's beautiful and it reads so well that I read it out loud several times today. Thank you, Lee A |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
LeeJ - This is an absolutely stunning write! Your words are still running around in my head and the intensity of emotion moving me to tears. Beautiful, LeeJ, simply beautiful! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
two words, my friend, describes all I have to say about this... I wish... j. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
A whirlwind of passion! Amazing writing Lee. Simply stunning! Am I glad I checked this out; it's going straight to my library! WOW! miscellanea |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I'd forget my head if it weren't held on by a rubberband--can you believe I was so emotionally charged by your poem that I forgot to check the library thread? Well, I did... (Sure has been a long Monday!) miscellanea |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Exciting read. Beautifully expressed emotion. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: LeeJ YOU ARE PURE BLISS! Each line holds so much emotion that it could stand alone and still be a poem. ... but to drink them all together leaves the reader overwhelmed, kind of drunk, drunk of beauty. BLISS! Yes, another one for the library! Love, Margherita |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a passionate beauty this is!!! Excellent! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Captivating! Compelling! Passionate! ~ Brilliant!!! I'll have some of what you're having! lol Gosh, I had to keep reminding myself that I was reading the words of another woman!!! lol  Linda |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I am your harlot of thought your hide & seek of wine" and you are a magnificent poet too such fervor! |
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