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Your Disease
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Your Disease |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
*This is a very sarcastic poem, but this has been weighing on my mind very heavily lately...* I look at you, And all I see, Is someone who, Just disappoints me. I've gotten past the point, Where I try to help, It doesn't do anything, Except frustrate me. It seems like, You only live, To continue on, Killing yourself. I look at you, And all I see, Is someone who, Just disappoints me. Forget about you kids, They're not important Just mistakes you made, When you were young. Why should they care, How long you're in their lives? What does that little can, Have anything to do with that? I look at you, And all I see, Is someone who, Just disappoints me. You'll never try to realize, How much it affects me, To see you this way, Every time I see you.. And I know deep in my heart, That your disease, Will be your undoing, And it'll bring you to your knees, 'Til you'll beg for it to stop, But it'll be too late, That habit you shoulda' dropped, Will hold your whole fate. So as I look at you, All I can see, Is someone who, Just disappointed me, The one who meant the most, And cared the least... "The more you suffer, the more it shows you really care.." ~ The Offspring |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Hey I dug this and could almost feel the dissapointment and sorrow. Kudos! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ouch |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There are many complications to what could be considered diseases, or even, vices...which turn into dis-ease... And this poem, m'friend, can be related to by many, I'm sure. It was good of you to share.  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
aww Stac....this tugs......  Hugs sweet niece o'mine..... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes, I can feel your frustration and disappointment in this poem... a good write.. thank you for sharing this .. RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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