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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Sensation I loved him so much it made my skin ache just to reach the edge colored streaks of silver blue rolling upon the poetry of rain tender spot in a velvet storm ink curled and bled on paper as liquid passion hit hot blacktop sizzling to rise on steamed breath swirling in this heat I fly like a child running on tip toes to catch each possible drop suddenly a charge passes of kisses cool against my lips surely I am singed as thunder holds me tight between it’s heavy clapping and just when I should be most afraid I am calm “but I'm so hard to handle |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Romantically beautiful words that sweep the reader away...Well done...*Big Hugs* |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
a beautiful love poem. enjoyed. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh boy...I've known this to....suffered the indulgence, and would again still.... smiles and hugs a delightful read |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I loved him so much it made my skin ache Yes... and still do... and your words recall every vivid sensation. Excellent!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"and just when I should be most afraid I am calm" and I know this feeling too Helen |
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