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Judgment Day
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Judgment Day |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England 
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Judgment Day I don’t believe in God and I don’t believe in luck, it is lucky God has made me find the truth about his book. He wrote so many versions that I cannot read them all, so it’s easier if your realize that there is no God at all. Others have their ‘One True God’ to see them through their day, while others win the Lottery as ‘Good Luck’ comes their way. But me, I‘ll stand on my own feet and always earn my pay, for I know I’m never lucky with no God to guide my way. I could kid myself in thinking that my God was by my side, and then from the facts of living I would find somewhere to hide. It may bring a nice warm comfort to the lining of my soul, but without my own direction would I really live life whole. There’s a place that they call Heaven. There’s a place that they call Hell. There are devils and some demons, there are even gods as well. But the gods are also demons and they roam about our land, so I don’t trust luck to devils and I make my own true stand. When I’m old, and tired, and knackered then I just might change my mind. At the point that I am dying it is then that I may find, that the God who walked beside me was the one who saw me through, but till then I trust the Judgment that was born in me and you! Ivor G Davies. The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Are you a musician as well? I ask because this is so lyrical and could easily be a song in perfect four quarter time. "There’s a place that they call Heaven. There’s a place that they call Hell. There are devils and some demons, there are even gods as well. But the gods are also demons" Only a person who believes in ONE, could write such. I am very impressed--and I love your boldness. Kudos! |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Let' just say I play Devil's Advocate a lot.... Thanks for the response, Ivor |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*laughing* shaking my head too I praise you for boldness and you answer with evasion. Okay.  We'll just say you play Devil's Advocate. An interesting instrument, nevertheless.  |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
or, truly, truly. enjoyed as always. |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
The more I post, the more you'll see that you can read me like a book. Most of my poetry (except the silly stuff) deals with my very nature! I only strum guitar...very badly! mind you I try (and own or owned) cornet banjo mouth organ piano penny whistle paper and comb none with much sucess I do tend to play on peoples minds though (or so I'm told!) Ivor |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thank you Ivor I tend to play with people's mind sometimes I get a bit behind and it's my fault that I am cursed: I tend to think things out reversed! Much enjoyed, m'friend.  |
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