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Open Poetry #40

While I Viewed Within

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2007-01-16 01:33 AM

While I Viewed Within

Wording my emotions
Wistfully penning blue
When I have felt sad
Writing is what I do

Willing myself forward
Words gave me voice
Whatever stirs inside
Writing is my choice

Words delve in depths
While writing at length
With the pen in hand
Weak finds strength

With the words I locate
Whole hearted I scroll
While I viewed within
Windows of my soul

Hope©2007
Link to the poem with music and graphic at theURL below
http://thestarlitecafe.com/poems/104/poem_83853449.html

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

1 posted 2007-01-16 02:04 AM

Dang Hope I loved this. I know it was not easy to write this poem by looking at the poem as a whole. This poem speaks to all poets! Great Job!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2007-01-16 07:20 AM

What a Wonderful W Write

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2007-01-16 01:00 PM

nicely done Hope, very much enjoyed!!!

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

4 posted 2007-01-16 03:23 PM

Sling the ink HopeS!! It is a gracious therapy indeed, for many a troubles. Wonderful!

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2007-01-16 10:44 PM

Now I bet that was fun to do? Enjoyed this m'friend.

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