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A Velvet Glove
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A Velvet Glove |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A velvet Glove There is a rhythm to my rhyme A simple humble rave in time A rolling wave that paves a wrung A transcendental shave of tongue As pressure molds the finest surf Just so, I’d rhyme a soother turf To soften graphic filigree The epitaph of pedigree There is a dust I would embrace To form a garden of encase A minuscule but point of clear Oasis for the heart and ear A treasure I could leave behind To sooth the aching of our kind Some words above bombastic lust Some birds to fly above the crust A pure white dove of rhyming love A net of warmth a velvet glove |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Sir, this is very truly a wonderful poem. "A transcendental shave of tongue" ..lightening. Every one needs this so we can talk like the Velvet Glove holding a dove, soft with love. a sofe poem with hard core of truth. thank you sir for the sharing. have a wonderful day, Sir Tabin!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz Thank you for enjoying the poem. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ My goodness, sir ... you are poetically perfect~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, A  and huglets back. |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Sey's rhyme encased in silken purse So smoothly slips through every verse To glide us gently on his rhyme Caressed by beauty in each line But then of course tis Seymour's way All hearts and ears with words to sway. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ivordavies A delightful reply, thank you so much my friend. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Magnificent...what a wonderful poem...filled with the softness of love...*Big Hugs* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime55 A wonderful comment thank you so much. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Sir Sy your white dove of rhyming love has flown into my heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady It couldn't find a better nesting place. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A treasure I could leave behind To sooth the aching of our kind Don't you know you do this every time you pick up your pen or paintbrush... or simply talk with friends? *S* YOU are the treasure, my friend... Beautiful write!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern And you are a treasure to me my friend. |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..another Tabin poem to lighten my day..very nice.. spiros -- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Spiros, Thank you so much. |
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