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Open Poetry #40
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OriginalNYGuy
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since 2007-04-14
Posts 14
Texas,US
0 posted 2007-04-23 11:25 PM

If I could explain with animation
My heart jumped out with arms and legs
And pulled my body with rope in hand
He pulled me right up to her and told me what to say

As he demanded my actions
My little heart was quite persistant
Soon i was talking to her
She caught my eye so honestly

I couldn't believe it
A pretty girl was interested in my life
Not just any girl
She seemed to have an amazing calm

I called her the next day
No answer
I left a message apologizing for my drunkeness
I usually don't meet nice girls at the bar

When your heart wants something
You tend to get it
When her heart said nothing
I felt hurt

But its okay, God knows my name
Hes got my girl
I guess it wasn't her
So I'm not hurt for long

But captivated by her I was !
© Copyright 2007 Paul Iudica - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-04-23 11:46 PM

oh. I love to read this. what a soft torture of love.


enjoyed.
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