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Foreverly (Tanka Challenge) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Foreverly ~*Marge Tindal*~ The day dawns in hues glistening with the glow of love caressing this heart with warmest thoughts from above loving you foreverly~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lovely, Marge, and what a beautiful word "foreverly" is! |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
It appears you've met the chaallenge and then some with tender words ushering a lovely new day. Rae |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Fine response to the 'love tanka' challenge! I especially loved: The day dawns in hues glistening with the glow of love I hope other wonderful 'P.I.P.-world' poets will take up this 'challenge' as well (This is a season, and a time in human history, when thoughts and words of LOVE should be spread far and wide via any and all available modes of expression!....this is, at least, what I truly believe!) |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
All I can say is "beautiful and romantic".  Awesome poem!!!Poetry is beauty in words. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
wow. always you! so beautiful. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What a great way to start the day! *hugs*...jo |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Marge Tindal, This is good, except, I'd substitute "forevermore" for "foreverly". That is, unless you want to coin a new word for the language--which of course is fine. We could always use a new word or two. Bobby |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: You are such an accomplished writer and this is more evidence of that! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
A delightful read that colors the world with love....*Big Hugs |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
beautifully done! |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Foreverly, Marge...FOREVERLY!!! INclan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks all ... great challenge ... I adore the Tanka format~ RJ~ Um, I did coin it ... and it's actually been added to several online dictionaries~ LOL ... poets are like that ... yeah, we are~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and I'm wishing every day of your life and beyond are filled with what you describe so deliciously.... Hugs Me |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So very beautiful dear Marge. Heart hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marge...You make this look as easy as a walk in the park. Enjoyed foreverly...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is so pretty |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Just popping in to say thanks to each of you~ I'm busy with book promotions and haven't had the chance to be here as much as I'd like, but all things in good time~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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