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Open Poetry #40

I love you?

Jenna
Member

since 2007-03-20

Posts 180

0 posted 2007-04-20 01:02 PM

Why are we saying these words
because they just fall like rain
and dry away
with no reminder of them
ever being present.

Maybe it's become a habit
to which we have become accustomed,
an addiction
on which we depend
because once it's taken away
there is nothing left

We use it as our safety net
to cushion the blows
to really hide whats beneath the surface
to which we cannot admit.

It pains us to look it in the face
To see the ugliness that is within
to view the alternative of what will be
The choices that we have to make
when we decide
that those 3 words
will never be enough

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2007-04-20 01:03 PM

It pains us to look it in the face
To see the ugliness that is within
to view the alternative of what will be
The choices that we have to make
when we decide
that those 3 words
will never be enough

profoundly gripping....loved this Jenna...

MindBodySoul
Member

since 2007-01-10

Posts 196
NJ

2 posted 2007-04-20 01:22 PM

I have to say... that this write HIT ME DEAD IN THE HEART!!! It is so very true. 3 Words that are said, sometimes just because we need to hear it or because it became a way of living... an addition! Yet those words are no longer enough... because we come to realize... that they were just words that the wind blew away!

Thanks for sharing... really enjoyed reading it.

Jen--->MindBodySoul

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