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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
Into the world from heavenly glows out of it zapped by wizards sapped by wrong connections did you get those days you waited at the heap wanting change but you slept season to season tossed and turned restless wanting change Into summer days spring skipped aside fall wept winter froze exposed out of that heated by rays chilled at nights followed age old patterns out of that native art never paid inspired walked the streets afraid retired had to be at the heap four pounds produced a day piled high plastic deep collected in this world than ejected out one by one drained dry by poor connections, waiting for change. |
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Rottiestyl Member
since 2007-04-19
Posts 60Illinois, USA |
but you slept season to season tossed and turned restless wanting change The used to be me in a nut shell. Great write. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
thanks for reading, no need to put yourself down, I have noticed that my form has changed over time and that has style has changed too |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whew, made me feel zapped.... well done!!!! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
neet -Juju |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
I, too, have been zapped by this wonderful work. Very thought provoking. I like! ~Terry ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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