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Weightless Love!
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Weightless Love! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Weightless Love! Here....where clocks have killed the day; and, I have become a stranger to the wilderness (like a willow weeping on a city street) I seek the perpetual stillness of some eternal night, (knowing we are less than a whisper of stardust on the winds of Time) or the lucid silence of mist and soft, sweet sunlight that purifies the dawn, as the final rose of Autumn blazes in fire and frost. I long to heed the call of soft sea voices over vast waters singing, beyond the ruined mountains and all of man’s despair; I hope to slip away somehow along a forest’s starlit canopy in deep, gentle dreams.... of gravities loss to weightless love! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Extremely well crafted my friend.. enjoyed this mucho! j. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet Exceptional write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 I can HEAR the weeping: "I have become a stranger to the wilderness (like a willow weeping on a city street)" |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful again. you write good poems. |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Vivid, exquisite, substantial. The word "poetry" may be a noun, but this poem is a verb. Each work you write becomes my new favorite. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Encore! |
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