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Do You Know? |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
Do you know? Do you have any idea? Of how much I love you! Can you see? Can’t you tell? The intensity of this emotion The strength of it… So willing to carry us both But it is not what I want! Its not, what will be! We should be carrying each other Look at me! Tell me! That all those tears Touched you… Has your world Turned you so cold That true warmth goes unnoticed Has your heart solidified To the point of no emotion Our connection so black and white I am your warmth And you are my coldness In the beginning you said I was your soul mate So why keep me at arms length Don’t you know? That the further you push me away The more I want to embrace you In my warmth Hold me close, you should For I will bring color to your colorless world Don’t you know? It’s a protective shield, you carry I had it once I broke free of it… It is time For you to do the same Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I could really feel your emotion through your verse. Honest pure writing. Well done. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
oh, what a cry! you have done fine in your part. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
such an emotional heart felt write  I very much enjoyed this... |
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