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Wind Song (rictameter)
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Wind Song (rictameter) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Wind song magical notes wafting by on the breeze crescendo of soft melody in rise and fall of orchestrated notes plays a rhapsody to my soul indulging my senses singing her tune. Wind Song seek the flame within yourself and let your soul be cleansed by the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit Thank you I enjoyed the read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ooooh this one is beautiful Donna. I know you aren't old enough to remember the perfume Wind Song, and the commercial on tv for it..but this reminded me of it...'your wind song stays on his mind'. Wonderful Rictameter!  For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sir Sey, I thank you. Hugs. Nancy, omg lady, yes I am but thank you very much...We have a lovely windy, snow/ice filled day blowing around here. Thanks.  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Donna I love the wind in this beautiful song...funny though, I always think of wind as male. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 A thoroughly enjoyable windsong! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
you have sung your wind song well gentle Donna lovely hugs |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Simply superb! Much applause!! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful. very beautiful enjoyed very much in reading this. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks to each of you. The sun came out for just a bit today, but the winds are still blowing. Hugs to all. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
this is really beautiful. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
WOW...this poem sings with the soft voice of the wind...I love it...*Big Hugs* |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
lovely poem, Gentle Spirit. You seem so in tune with nature... miscellanea |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can hear it now! very pretty poem |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you, each. Hugs n' peace to all. I've seen the paintings in the air |
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