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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Twilight The twilight of my night is here I cannot make it disappear It weights me down a heavy sight Its colors fussed and now are white It vacillates in misty dew And more impossible to view Impregnates now a dossal mind Entangled in a hopeless bind The butterfly is caught the sky In updrafts of the bilge of why For tails too long upon a kite Make chaos of a steady flight And thought it ever speaks of dare It must in flight a sober air Or turn in dash and spiral down Too soon to crash upon the ground And though I know the twilights light I hear but whispers of the night |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Seymour, Your poetry still facinates me as it takes me on your journey through differing stages of life.... Ivor |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ivordavies Thank you for recognizing it for what it was. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I know, I think... and I hear whispers of beating wings... and yes, me too.   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Thank you sweetie.  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Sir Sy recognizing it for what it is is one thing liking it is another I recognize it and I respect what you say |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
"Its colors fussed and now are white" I love this and it tells all. how beautifully say "its color fussed" "And thought it ever speaks of dare It must in flight a sober air Or turn in dash and spiral down Too soon to crash upon the ground" sir, so many angels around you so you know how strong the wind is. so prepare to soar up, up, and high and higher!" enjoyed as always. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PreciousPoet~ You light my morning with your twi-of-night rhyme~ Love ya' *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Thank you my dear. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz You have picked the best of the best. Thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Precious friend,  |
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Andrew Sewell Junior Member
since 2007-04-16
Posts 24County Durham, England |
A most enjoyable read.  Andrew "Writing is not necessarily something to be ashamed of, but do it in private and wash your hands afterwards." - R.A. Heinlein. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You are a very talented writer Seymour Tabin. And, you know I love to read you each and every day! Today is no exception. & , NancyFor it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Andrew Sewell Thank you so much. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, And you are a delight to me every day. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang! I have missed your words! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Dang I'm so glad to see you here. |
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