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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
I am thinking of giving this to a friend so opinions are needed! I know I confuse you and that at times you may not understand why I feel the way I do and why I push you away when you can see that I need your love and tender words. You know that i've built walls and hidden from the things that hurt, yet you perserve and help me rebuild what is lost, filling the emptiness and blackness that is inside, restoring me with faith, bringing me back to the light and guiding me to safer waters. Just like the missing parts of the puzzle you link everything back together again fitting them back into place so a clearer picture can be seen and everything is right again. Only you can heal me in this way, bringing down my defences so theres nothing left but the pain which you manage to erase bit by bit until the weight has lifted. I may not reveal much, at times nothing at all but it never fails to amaze me how you hear the words I never speak. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I suppose you can see why your title got my attention! lol  By all means, I believe you should give this to your friend. As you have found it difficult for you to express your feelings verbally, you have managed to do it very well through this open and very emotive piece of writing. Loving Light, EA |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. "I am thinking of giving this to a friend so opinions are needed!" Don't John . |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
Well it would be helpful if you could say why rather then just saying 'dont' |
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